It all started with
a abridged innuendo;
bustling winds,
winged leaves,
it was dark night,
and there they
stood,
out of sight,
a little talk,
a silent walk,
and some
feelings unfold,
some words never told...
august love,
passed by,
august love,
said goodbye.
great work...keep it up...
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Great work.....keep it up girl.....u r born to write....
ReplyDeletewonderful :)
ReplyDeletekeep writing.
nice and subtle.
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